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在我們的雅思寫作中,很多學(xué)生都會面臨拿到題目沒有想法或者想要表達(dá)的時候發(fā)現(xiàn)自己詞匯短語匱乏的問題,這些問題對于我們寫作來說都是致命的,所以今天就聊聊怎么能快速有效地解決這些問題。其實解決它并不是很難,除了正常的上課和背誦一些詞匯外,我們可以選擇做范文分析,既可以積累思路也可以積累重要的表達(dá)。今天我們利用楊凡的《雅思寫作官方范文大全》做一篇例子,看一下我們的范文分析可以怎么做。
題目: Some people say university should pay their tuition fees. Some others say the government should pay the tuition fees. What is your opinion?
There has been an increase in the number of university students who are unable to afford their tuition fees. It is suggested that/the government should be responsible for the full tuition of college students. Indeed, high tuition fees deprive some students of entering the university. However, I am one of many individuals who feel that university students should pay their tuition fees
The main reason is that it can ensure the quality of tertiary education. If the college students do not pay the tuition fees, it will lay a heavy financial burden on the government. If the government is unable to invest enough money on university education because of the limited budget, the quality of education cannot be ensured
The second reason for my propensity is that it is quite fair to require students to pay the full tuition. Some high school leavers give up their further study because they have their own aim in life. That is to say, going to university is a totally personal choice. Therefore, it is not unreasonable that the people who make such a choice pay for it
Some people may say that students from the countryside and undeveloped areas cannot go to college if students are required to pay the full tuition. It is a great loss to the country as well as a misfortune to students themselves. In fact, there are some feasible methods to solve the problem. The first option is the bank loan, although it has to be paid back at a later date. In addition, students can work part-time to earn money to cover some expenses.
So, as I see it, college students should pay the full tuition.
我們來看一下這篇的分析怎么做:
Topic: university students/ government should pay their tuition fees?
Para 1 : I am one of the individuals who feel that university students should pay their tuition fees.
Para2: The main reason is that it can ensure the quality of tertiary education.
If not pay à lay a financial burden on government à if government unable to invest enough money due to the limited budgetà cannot ensure quality of education
Para 3: The second reason for my propensity is that it is quite fair to require students to pay the full tuition.
Some give up further study àgoing to school is personal choice à pay for the choice
Para 4: some people say that students from the countryside and undeveloped areas cannot go to college if students are required to pay the full tuition.
Is a loss/ misfortune à some feasible methods to solve à bank loan + work part-time
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